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Average Rating: 5 (4 votes)

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MissElaney 20th Oct 2017, 1:05 AM edit delete reply
MissElaney
Nice reaction panel of shock. I don't have the same knack for expressions. Also what a bitch is Emma that she can't break up in person! Lord.
MK_Wizard 20th Oct 2017, 1:12 AM edit delete reply
MK_Wizard
Yeah, that was the idea I was going for.
AmeliaP 21st Oct 2017, 2:50 AM edit delete reply
AmeliaP
She broke with him by a phone call?!? Ice cold, man!
Matt Comics 20th Nov 2017, 5:28 PM edit delete reply
Matt Comics
Poor Jekyll, he's really a butt monkey isn't he. I like his hairstyle, btw.

The phone cord in panel 3 is a bit distracting. Maybe the part that got lost in the background should have been colored white/light grey instead. Not a big deal though.

Speaking of colors I really like your use of colored bubbles. It looks way better than usual bubbles with a white background like that, and it kinda gives each character their own voice.
MK_Wizard 20th Nov 2017, 8:31 PM edit delete reply
MK_Wizard
Thanks. I am actually redoing the first three chapters sort of for reasons like this.